Panel One: Narration: "Next Day" Wide shot of Fern, sitting on the railing on the rooftop. She's smiling and looking into the distance, wearing a pale floral peasant-style top with shorts, and her hair is up. It's a gorgeous day, with fluffy clouds in the sky and birds flocking behind her.
Panel Two: Side view of Fern as she turns to look towards the archway from the tower. "There you are!" she says. DJ is walking into the light, his hands in his pockets and his eyes lowered. Cal is hunched over, with his hands on his knees, panting from the climb. "Sorry we're >cough< late. >gasp!< SFX: >pant< >wheeze< Cal is wearing blue jeans and a white t-shirt with flying geese on it.
Panel Three: Fern's back as she turns to Cal, who's entered into the frame, still hunched over. She looks concerned as she asks him, "You okay?" "I'm fine. Jsut still..." He's smiling weakly as he answers, "Tired from gym class." SFX: >huff< >huff<
Panel Four: Profile shot of DJ, his face mostly hidden by his hair. "What did you find out?" he asks.
Panel Five: Fern is now facing into the walkway, and in the process of getting off the railing. She's annoyed, and says, glaring a bit at DJ, "Wow, okay, all business." Cal's looking back toward DJ and says, "He's been pacing a hole in the floor all night."
Panel Six: Head shot of DJ, whose hair looks limp and he's glaring slightly, with huge dark circles under his eyes. He looks very, very tired. Fern, from off-panel, says, "I can tell."
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