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Plague Rat – Chapter 4, Page 5

Description

Panel One: Closeup of Dj's eyes. He looks panicked as he says, "What?! No! I can't do that!"

Panel Two: Shot of the three of them, with Fern now perched on the railing. Her right arm is stretched out. She has thrown the end of the wrapping on her arm somewhere off-panel. There are motion lines indicating a throwing motion. She says, "Then say goodbye to your telescope 'privilages.'" DJ looks nervous, and Cal, standing behind her, is shocked.

Panel Three: A small, dragon-like stone gargoyle. The end of Fern's wrapping is winding around its long neck. SFX: FWIP!

Panel Four: Wide panel. Fern is in the center foreground with a wicked smile on erh face. She gives the wrapping a few tugs as she says, " I can't wait to see what your dad - " DJ looks horrified, and Cal interrupts, glaring. "Hold up!" he says, "That's not fair."

Panel Five: Shot from behind Cal and Fern. She's sitting on the railing, ready to leap off, and is turned to face him. She looks a bit confused. "What do you mean? she asks. "DJ can't gaurantee how well you'll do, so..." Cal says.

Panel Six: Closeup of Cal. He is backlit and has a sly look on his face. "How 'bout a compromise?"

Author Note

Now it's Cal's turn to make a deal.

Okay, I LOVE that center panel. Fern looks like a serial killer if you take away the dialoge, and I was cakling the entire time I was working on it. That's one of my favorite panels, so far.

And in other news, we're getting our next round of boosters today, so... Yeah! Social responsibility is good. Painful and probably a little sniffly, but ultimately good.

Get boosted!
- Bran

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